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Goldilocks and the Three Bears

Once lived a family of bears far, far away in the midst of a forest.They lived close to a village where there was a cottage where the family of bears lived. They were not your normal Teddy Bear for which father bear was very large in size, momma bear was closer to an average sized bear,and baby bear was smaller and closer tothe size of a Teddy Bear.

Each bear had a different sized bed,father bears was large and comfy. Mother bears bed was middling in size, while baby bears bed was a small cherrywood bed that father bear had ordered from a couple of beaver friends.

Across from the fireplace, by where the family sat for an evening rest stood a large red armchair for mother and father bear,and a very little chair for baby bear.

Neatly sat out on the kitchen where some Egyptian bowls. A large one for father bear, a smaller one for mother bear, and a little one for baby bear.

The neighbors were all respectful of father bear. Everytime father bear passed in the village all of the other animals bowed to the gigantic bear. Father bear liked these greetings and he politely replied to there kindness. Mother bear had lots of friends,she had visited them in the afternoon to exchange goods. Baby bear, however, had hardley any friends. This was because he was partly a bully and he liked to win arguements and games. He was a pest to and alwyas had himself into gossip. Not far away lived a fair-haired who had a similar nature to baby bear, only she as haughty and stuck up as well,and although baby bear always asked her to come play at his house she always said no.

One day,mother made a nice pumpkin pie,it was a new recipe with pumpkin seeds and other crushed pumpkin seeds. Her friends told her it was delicious,when the pie was ready she called in the family and said: "We have to let the pie cool off now,but untill then we can go take a nice little walk around the village."The beavers would really like to see us",mother said. Father bear andbaby bear would have much rather just went right on to eating the pie, but mom talked them to taking a nice one hour walk.

A short time later after the family had left for there walk,the snobby girl passed the bears house and said,"Wow, what an ugly house they have!"As she was going down the hill Goldilocks told her self that she was just gonna "peep" in the house. The little knocked silently on the door,no reply...

She just waled in the door and started in the kitchen doing her own thing."Pie!"Goldilockes screamed as she dipped her finger into mothers pie. "Mmm",Goldilocks said as she dipped into the bowl for some more.

As she made her way to the living room she saw a couple of chairs and sat down on all of them, the first one which was baby bears was just to hard for her. The second one which was momma bears was quite cumfy, but just not comfortable enough for her. The third and final chair which was papas was very comfortable for Goldilocks.

There was no question about which bed was baby bears and Goldilockes lay down and in no time fell sound asleep.

In the meantime the bears were on there way home ready for some pie. When they arrived home. the bears went straight to the pie and found that momma bears pie was eatin! Then the family went to the living room and found that the chairs were rocking for some odd reason. Then the family went to the bedroom and saw Golilockes laying on baby bears bed,sound asleep. Baby bear shouted and Goldilocks jumped out of the bed and ran all the way back home, The End.